• Performance Critique: April 28b

    Updated: 2012-05-16 01:33:19
    Checks during the 10pm show www.youtube.com/watch?v=xv7xssFBDAY 3m00s At least try a save line 3m50s Say this smoothly Overall: Horrible even for checks. Should’ve tried crowd work.

  • Performance Critique: April 28a

    Updated: 2012-05-15 20:32:15
    Checks during the 8pm show www.youtube.com/watch?v=SHQF9HzGf1U 2m17s It should be “don’t” instead of “didn’t” 4m39s Needs a better punch line 5m55s Cut the horny line 6m14s Say that more playfully Overall: Great set for checks, good set without the curve

  • Performance Critique: April 27a

    Updated: 2012-05-14 20:30:23
    The 8pm show www.youtube.com/watch?v=GRYEgn0tITc 0m50s Make going into material feel more seamless 4m52s Good honest save line 6m06s Cut the horny line 6m34s Might be worth reusing “I’m not gonna change for you” Overall: Average to poor.

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